Teacher Feedback

During our after school session on Thursday we decided to recieve feedback from one of our teachers on the progress of our sequence so far.
Thursday feedback- THR

POSITIVE
It is tightly cut
The transition between the hostage videos are very well done
The change in music fits the mood & our actress’ change in emotion
Sian’s POV shot
Lighting on the cigarette shots were very good
Font & colour are nice

NEGATIVE
Bekah is looking at the top camera
Lower the music slightly
Lower Sian’s groan
Adam’s POV looks a bit out of place
Cut down some of the ghosting
Cut down cigarette section

Friday feedback- BLK

POSITIVE
Smoking looks effective
Take away ghost effect on part of the cigarette footage

NEGATIVE
Cross-cutting too quickly, fad up slowly onto Adam
Make the walking longer, at the moment its too rushed
Extend the beginning sequence
Wiping eyes- ghosting it
Dialogue is a bit drowned
Cut to the lighting of the cigarette
Cut to close-up
Fade out title