Teacher Feedback

After looking at all the footage from our shoot, we needed a second opinion on some of the shots, and how to make it better as a whole. Here is the teacher feedback we got:

*Mother scream/ sharp intake of breath/Drops mug - Cut to black
*Music over the top?
*Shot of House - Long distance ESTABLISHING SHOT of street- fade down, then fade up inside house
*Coffee cup - stiring
*Ding Dong/ Knock knock - put down milk
*OR just coming down stairs, hand on banisters
*Adam unknown character, walks into shot, along the road, up the driveway, knock, delivers tape
*Shot POV through blurred window?
*Put tape through door - walk away quickly, looking over his shoulder
* Puts mug down, picks up tape
*Adult pose - dressing gown, slippers
*Record Sound of; intake of breath, clanking mug, smashed mug